This is my first blog ever, and the fact that it’s on my author website is a dream come true. So welcome!
Readers have remarked on the significance of the setting for Annie Crow Knoll: Sunrise. When I am writing, the characters’ environment and how they are responding to it gives me a lot of information. Sometimes I see the characters in a particular setting (Packard’s Schoolhouse Studio, down on the dock, in a particular cottage) and then I wait to see what they are doing and hear what they are saying to each other. Other times, I hear the characters talking, and I have to wait to see where they are or I have to decide the best place to put them for this conversation. The setting affects what they are doing while they talk. I see them like I would characters in a movie or on a stage setting.
As an actor and a director, a character’s environment is a very important choice to utilize. For example, if I’m acting in a role and the setting is a kitchen, I might play with my silverware if my character is anxious or embarrassed. I could grab a dish towel and snap it playfully at another character to flirt or to joke around. I might make a cup of tea to soothe myself or to soothe the other character. Because I work this way as an actor, I see my characters like this. I place them in an environment so I can discover things they’ll use in that setting to support what they’re saying, feeling, and experiencing.
For example, when Packard is painting and someone enters his School House Studio, he may respond to that other person with his paint brush. He could keep painting. He could stop painting and clean the brush. He might drop the brush right on the floor. These choices give the reader a good deal of information. Also the reader can feel more a part of the environment and understand the characters by seeing how they respond, in this particular story, to the Knoll and the bay and the birds. We know right away that Grace and Annie are going to connect because they both have pet birds, and Grace is immediately ready to look for owls with Annie.
I’m so glad that you checked out my website and this blog. I hope you enjoy the book!
Stacey Blake says
love to see how authors work!
Gail says
Thanks, Stacey! It was fun to share it.
Olivia Hardin says
Great blog post and so similar to how I too develop my stories. Annie Crow Knoll: Sunrise is a beautiful book and I can’t wait for more.
~Olivia
Gail says
Thanks, Olivia! I could see this in your book All for Hope. Since the characters were on the run, it was great to watch them react to each place they stayed.